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Peace

the smile of a stranger the caress of the summer breeze the random laugh of a child doubled over to its knees the gentle crash of the ocean the hand settled in mine the clouds making faces in this endless space of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 5:44:00 PM
Really enjoyed this poem! Very sweet and well written. It had me daydreaming I were outside on a pretty day enjoying natures gifts! Thank you for that :)
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Date: 4/17/2012 1:41:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week J. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:56:00 PM
Hi J-This to me denotes tranquillity and happiness,a beautiful combination.You have a lovely visual way of expression. I can see your little child bent over with laughter.Although few lines this speaks volumes.I think you are very skilful.Your words waft over the readers mind creating within them their own feelings of serenity and peace.Congratulations for making the feature page.And thank you for sharing this beautiful piece that I would like to add to my favourites please. Luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 4/11/2012 7:28:00 PM
This poem is such a gem....(I love the 2nd-3rd line combination....what a lovely lovely poem!!!!
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Date: 4/11/2012 5:32:00 PM
Congrats J! Lovely words you have shared.Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:19:00 PM
cpngrats on a perfect first place win J. ..
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Date: 4/11/2012 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "UPTO ELEVEN" contest J. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:05:00 AM
Wonderful poem, enjoyed reading it immensely. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dover...well done...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/9/2012 9:13:00 PM
Dover, this is a very lovely poem.. love the image of the clouds making faces... nice...pd
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