Peace

Don't blindly follow
you are a true patriot
with a peace sign.

Refuse to carry
weapons that kill a spirit.
Do not shoot at trees.

peacesenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 1, 2012 at 11:38 AM

I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Sue. Love and best wishes always, Carol

Daver Austin

February 20, 2010 at 10:42 AM

Yes, in my younger days - now, though, I say "do not shoot at" anything. Super write. Love, daver

Gert W. Knop

February 17, 2010 at 6:12 AM

Well penned message, Sue! Too much happend with guns and other weapons even here in Germany where we have strict lawa on guns. Keep writing and thank you for your kind comment...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 16, 2010 at 7:18 PM

Thankxxx Sue for your special comments on my poetry tonight.. luv your blog today for those Pisces poets ... u do a terrific job with this birthday stuff.. I have enough trouble keeping up with my family and friends.. awesome ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

February 11, 2010 at 2:49 PM

Powerful are your words,great message,Charma:)

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2010 at 2:16 PM

Good message, Sue!! And as for my ACT 1, hmmm, I wish I could TELL you what happens next. I guess I would have to finish it to know. haha. Thanks for your comment. LUv,Andrea

John Freeman

February 8, 2010 at 10:04 PM

Awesome poem Sue. None of us would ever think of killing someone in the physical sense. But many do not give it a second thought when verbally murdering someone's life force with their sharp words. Just as devastating! Amazing words in your verse Sue. Sincerely, love, Moses

Audrey Haick

February 8, 2010 at 6:42 PM

Wow! Sue, this is really good! I wish to see the day when this does happen. Thanks for your kind comments, today. Peace and love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 8, 2010 at 4:51 PM

Lovely Sue .. was thinking of u a few days ago to catch up on your reads.. then saw your birthday blog on birthdays and where does the time go to keep up with commenting? great Senryu.. powerful words... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie.