P.D. Vs' Amy Gr33n,,Slam, Bam

P.D. vs' Amy Gr33n,,Slam, Bam Thank You Ma'am 


So Miss @my  Gr33n,
Do you think your s__t  is mean
Trying to compete
Do you really want to taste defeat
Your dose of medicine, had no effect at all
Your Slam, Bam Thank You Ma'am 
Was a sorry booty call.
Trying to talk the talk
Trying to bark and walk
All them words your are saying
Sounds like you are praying
Who really wants to listen?
Who really should care?
And what the hell is that S__t in your hair?
So you think you can play the part.
Before things fall apart
Please @my Gr33n stop before you fart
Trust me it does not matter If I let you win.
Your words are pointless and the idea is pathetic.
Please stop talking you are giving me a headache.
Just stop rhyming.
Sounds like your crying.
Okay pause.............as the moment goes bye.
Giving  you a minute before you break down and cry.
My words are a weapon, You know that right.
Next time shut your mouth, keep those lips tight
Let me just stop and bring this to an end.
@my Gr33n remember ....I am your friend

By:P.D.

((once again for fun...thank you Amy Green for the fun slam.))
    p.s. S__T stands for shot  if you are wondering,,he he he
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Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:36 PM
I'm sure this is a rather clean version of the slam..funny!! "shot"..lol
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 9:14 PM
LOL You are the BEST ON THE SOUP.I love you and your work!!!
Love Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 4:01 PM
I hear your the best. Looks pretty good. I'm ready. Ladies first. I hope my slams don't hurt. They arent meant to. I think it's a heck of a way for to be entertained. Everyone has your back. They say you've got the crown. C'mon challenge me. See what it's like on my side of town... Let me know if I step out of bounds. I don't want to be called on a technicallity. C'mon Poet Destroyer, come get a piece of me...
Chachere Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 4:33 PM
lol.sounds like you just completely find her as no competition, geez P.D. haha, grl, the poets who decide to slam against u are trippin, forreals.it would be fun, but not for everyone to see.i would give u a try, once in a lifetime, maybe, only on my crazy hyper days, like today!!.lol.--my name should be Veronica Lynn..means "true image", thats the native american grl's name in enigma.she can slam to ur level! oh gosh, i wasn't supposed to say that..shhh.i kid with u.lmao(: ~Always
A  Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:46 PM
CRAZY, oN ALL THE CoMMENTS. bILLY U CRACK ME UP. oF CoURSE HE WILL RooT 4 HER. THEY BoTH S????...NoT bILLY So MUCH. I lOvE bILLY. -SKAT
Green Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Wrote a little impatient doodle for you.
Green Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Jimbo- you gotta have balance in your brain! LOL
Goff Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:13 AM
PD......my friend, I respect the skill in which you ladies & gents slam ea. other...myself, when I pull those sort of emotions from my reptilian brain, negative energy disturbs my sense of spiritual balance, which is the place from where I most enjoy my creations, does this make sense ?!?!....from the left-field bleachers...jimbo
Hales Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 12:18 AM
Great stuff Pd...x ps the call happened 7yrs ago i am ok such feelings never go but ty for your kind comments sarah ps wonder how the sonnet does today xha ha ha ha
Thekidster Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:53 PM
"@my Gr33n remember...I am your friend...once again for fun...thank you Amy Green for the fun slam.))" - What kinda friggin slam is that? Ya call this a slam Catfight? I ain't seen no babe's top get slammed off yet! OK, $1500.00 to the 1st babe who willingly slams her OWN top off....I'm gettin desperate. Kidster WASN'T Here...I can see why you don't slam women Your Majesty. - JK, all in fun Your Majesty. Great Slam..Still Friends U & Me...now slam ya friggin top off!
Solomon Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:20 PM
great poem and thank you for viewing a lot of mine as well, greatly appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:35 PM
hahaha. I gotta see what you did in Chris' comments. thanks for the fav, "sweet" slammin' P.D. LUv, Andrea
Conway Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:33 PM
P.D. you are priceless-I hope you don't slam me cause I might just cry, lol!~Tirzah~
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:14 PM
I enjoy this form a lot pity I cant do it lol.. Really enjoyed this Syd - rgds WN
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:12 PM
hahaha, S--t stands for shot. YOU are so funny, P.D.WHATEVER. Now i have got to find Amy's poem that you were slamming back at. She sure was a good sport to suggest this. LUv,Andrea ps Chris here, doing his "rate increaser" game he did that once to me too. What a character.
Mcgovern Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 12:59 PM
I hope I never cause you to shot on my parade. Great slam. I love it when we can have fun and laugh at each other. This is my kind of...... shot.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Amy has a big horse.. watch out P.D. BBF..haha..Awesome Amy knows how to rideas well as u slam .. fun read.. with luv..your BBF "Sweetheart"
Trevino Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Wow, this was a fun one to read P.D. very funny... very directful ha ha. Is this the last of you two?? =(^.^)=Royal
Cobb Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 10:21 AM
be careful p.d. we don't want to upset the masses again. can't afford to lose you. great slam though.
K. Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:33 AM
oh just read your comment again on my If poem--was I talking about you there? Haha, "if" you think so ;) hey but seriously hopefully you can't relate to that... & I think Chris already had his fix, as seen by his comments over here ;) maybe he's all p.d.'d out now...or then again maybe not--i think a lot of people find you addictive==winkity wink wink
K. Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:26 AM
you and me both, p.d.! I think I never did learn to really grow up, hahaha--even have myself surrounded with kids---maybe that's why we click too--we're stuck in Neverland--which is fine by me ;) hmm maybe I should write a poem about this next time ;)
K. Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 8:50 AM
whoa--Chris did you go on a p.d. withdrawal or something ;)???
A   Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 9:44 PM
gees! Chris you must be really bored, or want in on the fun. Sorry buddy i will call your nanny to clean up your mess already. By the way the more you pull stunts like this poets are going to think you are P.D. or you can't be on the site without me...lol,, get a wife or life,,,better yet go slam yourself again,..p.d.
K. Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:00 PM
haha double darn!! I thought S__T meant snot ;) my second guess was spit, actually--- ;) thanks btw glad you liked that if poem---:) --nikko :)
Byrne Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 7:46 PM
sock it to 'em!
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