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Paying the Toll

PAYING THE TOLL Miss Florida sensually smiles shaking her belt. The tourists insert dollars. She’s so svelte. We bow to her smile. Her youth does beguile. Her burn’s shy, posterior feels red welt. Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 4/28/2017 7:56:00 PM
oh it must really hurt to be Miss Florida. hahaha. Great job, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:05:00 PM
Yes and those toll roads keep eating our change...$8 worth
Date: 4/28/2017 5:02:00 PM
Nice limerick, Kim. Is this for the contest? If so, good luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 5:46:00 PM
No. Another one. Feeling the rhythm of the limerick! Kim
Date: 4/28/2017 2:05:00 PM
Hi Kim , very nice Limerick , ' shaking her belt ' :)) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thanks, Niall!

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