Florin Andronic Poet Free verse

Paved Jungle

We are living in such a paved jungle!
There are miles of concrete and sidewalks
There are skylights and many skyscrapers,
but we really have to pay attention! 
At any corner are waiting: snakes, lions and tigers.
Oh poor walker, can't really enjoy peace and hope ...
It is just the pursuit of happiness!
It's just a struggle for better!
There is just one solution to this crisis,
to eradicate the beasts of our society 
and then transform it in a paved garden.
Doing so, the peace and hope will settle in forever.

by Florin Andronic
3/25/2015

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Cynthia Jones April 6, 2015 at 7:29 PM Florin, this is a great piece. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia Florin Andronic April 12, 2015 at 6:05 PM thanks Cynthia

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2015 at 10:00 PM I always come back to view my replies.... thank you :) LINDA Florin Andronic March 29, 2015 at 11:48 PM so nice of you :)

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2015 at 12:00 PM Hello Florin, once again... I am delight to support your poems. Thank you once again for the reply on my comemnt.. PD Florin Andronic March 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM :) anytime

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2015 at 9:45 AM - A small greeting and warm welcome, Florin :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :) Florin Andronic March 29, 2015 at 1:54 PM thanks Anne

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2015 at 11:00 PM Florin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@ Florin Andronic March 27, 2015 at 11:12 PM thanks for stopping by thanks for support :)

Skat A March 26, 2015 at 12:30 PM Florin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT" Florin Andronic March 26, 2015 at 12:39 PM thanks for stopping by, thanks for welcome :)

Paul Schneiter March 25, 2015 at 11:44 PM Florin, there is a compelling message in this poem for all of us. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you will write some more poems. Florin Andronic March 25, 2015 at 11:46 PM thanks, working on it :)