Paused Shadow

There is a split, precious time where it is necessary to stop everything And just stare into the hearts of the unknown To really look in Without a speck of fear to curl your way downwards In a fetal position I avert my eyes to view the pumping organ But all I see is space As dust rises and falls Into my burning, crying eyes I need to stop what I’m doing To shed some light Because I am casting shadows all around me Leaving everything I am behind You need this festive light that you end up always hating in the end On every floor I will step for you On every wall my shadow will stand tall Shedding its darkening light Stopping everything in time Lean against it and ignore it Become it There is always tomorrow One little speck can destroy the entire universe And that is why I must pause To shed some light Will you shine in return? I need the warmth, not the burn! And we will fearlessly walk into the sun Lessons learned Follow the road and you will see my shadow And then…only then Can I press the play button
-inspired by My Shadow by Keane-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tsiluma Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Love this! ... Just to let you know, I love the depth in your poems Laura. How you weave seemingly simple things into intricate verses gets me each time. Nice!
Breidenthal Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 4:47 PM
Ohthanks so much! I'm glad you love it! :3
Alvez Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:19 PM
A heart speaks! Well versed. Cynthia
Breidenthal Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 8:31 PM
Thank you, Cynthia. :3
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 1:14 PM
I would have to agree with the Scribe on this one..an excellent write here..great work!!
Breidenthal Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Thanks so much!
Kearley Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 10:52 AM
Nice one! All shadows are cast from light... Let your love light shine! ;o)
Breidenthal Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Will do best I can! Thanks Dan
May Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 6:25 AM
nicely penned...enjoyed...Thanks for stopping by....love...Joseph
Breidenthal Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Thanks - glad you enjoyed this one.
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