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Paused Shadow

There is a split, precious time where it is necessary to stop everything And just stare into the hearts of the unknown To really look in Without a speck of fear to curl your way downwards In a fetal position I avert my eyes to view the pumping organ But all I see is space As dust rises and falls Into my burning, crying eyes I need to stop what I’m doing To shed some light Because I am casting shadows all around me Leaving everything I am behind You need this festive light that you end up always hating in the end On every floor I will step for you On every wall my shadow will stand tall Shedding its darkening light Stopping everything in time Lean against it and ignore it Become it There is always tomorrow One little speck can destroy the entire universe And that is why I must pause To shed some light Will you shine in return? I need the warmth, not the burn! And we will fearlessly walk into the sun Lessons learned Follow the road and you will see my shadow And then…only then Can I press the play button
-inspired by My Shadow by Keane-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 1:38:00 AM
Love this! ... Just to let you know, I love the depth in your poems Laura. How you weave seemingly simple things into intricate verses gets me each time. Nice!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2012 4:47:00 PM
Ohthanks so much! I'm glad you love it! :3
Date: 8/29/2012 8:19:00 PM
A heart speaks! Well versed. Cynthia
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/29/2012 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Cynthia. :3
Date: 8/29/2012 1:14:00 PM
I would have to agree with the Scribe on this one..an excellent write here..great work!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/29/2012 7:14:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 8/29/2012 10:52:00 AM
Nice one! All shadows are cast from light... Let your love light shine! ;o)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/29/2012 7:15:00 PM
Will do best I can! Thanks Dan
Date: 8/29/2012 6:25:00 AM
nicely penned...enjoyed...Thanks for stopping by....love...Joseph
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/29/2012 7:15:00 PM
Thanks - glad you enjoyed this one.

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