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Paulette-2

Siren-red hair, it screams from port.
Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance.
Intense Paulette ~ the sea’s consort.
Siren-red hair, it screams from port,
nudging the captain and his court.
Danger at dawn - high risk romance.
Siren-red hair, it screams from port.
Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance.

1/8/2021

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Paulette Calasibetta

January 16, 2022 at 9:31 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very passionate! :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

January 16, 2022 at 12:23 PM

Thank you, Paulette! :)

Paula Goldsmith

January 15, 2022 at 9:32 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful story/win. Love your, "Siren-red hair" and pretty picture. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues

January 15, 2022 at 2:04 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex

January 15, 2022 at 5:27 AM

Great triolet with "Siren-red hair" -Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

January 15, 2022 at 2:04 PM

Thank you!

Julia Ward

January 15, 2022 at 2:07 AM

I like the drama, ensuring a high placement in my contest.

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:38 PM

Quite beautiful and with depth. Enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues

January 11, 2022 at 3:20 PM

Thanks, M.L.!

Joanna Daniel

January 9, 2022 at 4:29 AM

A really unique write on the theme, Kim, hope it wins:)

Kim Rodrigues

January 9, 2022 at 6:01 AM

Thanks so much, Jo!

P.S. Awtry

January 8, 2022 at 12:59 PM

The idea, the flow, word choice, beautiful and the picture--perfect complement. :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 8, 2022 at 1:21 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Joseph P. DiMino

January 8, 2022 at 11:06 AM

This is really excellent writing, mysterious and enchanting. "Red sky at night, etc.." . I come from a long-line of fishermen who sailed the Mediterranean. Great-granddad went down with his schooner, in the early 1800's during a storm. Read your bio, from Buffalo New York. I lived in Syracuse for a winter, back in the 60's. Syracuse was -27 with 54 inches of snow on the ground. Buffalo had a 120 inches on the ground. Talk about cold. Brrrr!

Kim Rodrigues

January 8, 2022 at 1:25 PM

Thanks so much for sharing, Joe! I love every bit of your comment! We moved to the Hudson Valley when I was two but visited our family in Buffalo all the time.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

January 8, 2022 at 10:23 AM

Simply beautiful! Now i feel ashamed with mine! Although I'm new here, just wanted to join a contest! that's all. but reading this magnificent poesy Triolet, you made it so fairy-tale like, amazing feeling! hope it wins! Thanks - Marshall

Kim Rodrigues

January 8, 2022 at 1:26 PM

This community of Soupers helps one other to grow as poets. Welcome!