Paula

Pardon the open door
Allow yourself to my heart
Under the stars will I kiss thee
Loving thee and eternity
Always and forever thy poet

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/23/2009 11:38:00 PM

Jeremiah, congrats on your feature...Raul

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/23/2009 4:37:00 PM

Congrats Jeremiah on your acrostic "Paula" being featured. Vince

James Fraser

Date: 5/23/2009 8:18:00 AM

Beautiful poem Jeremiah and congratulations on being featured, James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/22/2009 1:37:00 PM

Jeremiah, your poem is a very sweet acrostic. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/21/2009 7:43:00 AM

I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/18/2009 1:27:00 PM

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S-----well deserved,for me we could feature all,cos your poetry is magic----charma;-)

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/18/2009 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

James Peranteau

Date: 5/18/2009 5:47:00 AM

Jeremiah,...This Acrostic is fantastic,..I love reading Acrostics when they make clear sence ! Bravo,..and congrats being featured this week ! james

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/18/2009 12:47:00 AM

Very nice poem in an acrostic form. Congratulations on this featured peom. Ernilando

Date: 5/17/2009 5:01:00 PM

Nice use of the acrostic form. Nice tribute to Paula. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/23/2009 10:53:00 PM

Great Acrostic. Wonderful tribute to this one that obviously touches you deeply. Your soul drips with passion from each line. What a lucky woman to have her very own poet. Smiles from Lolita

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/10/2009 1:45:00 PM

GORGEOUS POETRY. Happy Easter. All the best.