Paul

There once was a plumber called Paul, Who fitted a tank to the wall. As he started to cough, All the pipes fractured off, And flooded his fiancee's hall. Jack Horne for Linda-Marie's Limerick contest Inspired by picture ps_JT76901

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 5:03:00 AM

Many congrats Jack on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2011 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2011 6:40:00 AM

Oh yes completely different, love this. congrats Jack. Harry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/11/2011 5:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jack in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 2:48:00 PM

HI, jack, just came here to see the winners' list and glad you are on it. Now let me go see if you have any new poems today!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2011 1:39:00 PM

Congratulations on the 15th place win in the contest, jack

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2011 11:35:00 AM

oh wow-- what a different take on the contest but funny :) enjoyed this one :) yikes poor fiancee though ;) Congrats on your win Jack

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/10/2011 10:50:00 AM

good to see you placed with this piece Jack, & all the best!

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2011 10:40:00 AM

Good to see your poem in the top 15, Jack. Congratulations on your honored 15th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congrats Jack on your success in my contest luv with this clever entry .. so fun.. thankxx for your constant support and friendship too...

George Aul

Date: 3/19/2011 9:58:00 AM

good luck in the contest...........George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 11:14:00 PM

oh, my goodness, I can't think which picture you saw to make you think of this one, but you sure got a funny out of it!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2011 12:34:00 PM

Funny limerick, Jack! I can just see this happening. Guess I'm not the only one who's had plumbing problems lately. LOL Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/16/2011 12:24:00 PM

Hey there Jack quite a witty entry, wishing you all the best for the contest ;) Thanks for the laughs tonight

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/16/2011 8:59:00 AM

The best to you in Linda-Marie's contest Jack. Thank you for all your kind comments. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/16/2011 4:22:00 AM

Wow what a funny story, Jack! Enjoyed your Limerick and wish you best of luck in Linda-Marie's contest. .....Gert:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/15/2011 9:17:00 PM

needed this witty limerick jack, good luck in contest.. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/15/2011 6:13:00 PM

Humrous and witty write with apt images, jack

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/15/2011 4:51:00 PM

good one....hehe!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 4:12:00 PM

thankxx for supporting my contest Jack.. good luck.. and yes they are my wedding photos from last August 22nd in Italy ..we were married on the beach at twilight .. awesome too.. after an 18 year romance.. so hope for everyone luv..