PATRIOTISM

I believe this poem qualifies as an "American Cinquain"

flag-bright
winds lifting hope
across a waiting land,
calling every heart to stand strong
as one

11th grade12th gradeamericacinquain

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Joe Maverick

June 11, 2026 at 10:59 PM

Agreed, agreed agreed..Its what you Need..deny the greed,,move with the Speed of care though..! And pray for (God to get you all through!)

Gershon Wolf

June 11, 2026 at 7:31 PM

This old phogey still tears up when the flag flies and they play the National Anthem. ~ gw

Line Gauthier

June 11, 2026 at 2:18 PM

Feels like an unachievable dream these days ~ we can't give up hope.

Sotto Poet

June 11, 2026 at 9:49 AM

Such a wonderful patriotic poem reflects a deep connection to your land with plenty of metaphors in each line. Well done Sara

Joseph P. DiMino

June 11, 2026 at 5:29 AM

What America is truly about, joining in spirit and praise of the Almighty -- Freedom is the Clarion Call. Striking fear into the hearts of those who oppose individualism and Christian Worship. Notice, opposition is always entails division by any vial means -- encouraging slavery of thought, adhering to only sanctioned group prescribed think.

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