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Patrick

^Gravity where is your force when she tells me 'I LOVE YOU' softly^ ^oh gravity how of no effect are you when i touch her and she smiles at me^ ^every morning when i wakeup next to her, I FLY^ ^since you gravity cannot hold me down when im wit her WHO CAN

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Date: 4/9/2013 10:35:00 PM
Patrick, where is your gravity indeed... Love the free verse poem. I'm glad your soul is flying when love can't hold you down. thank you for reading one of my poems... always~ Linda
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Date: 4/5/2013 3:36:00 AM
Wonderful, the power of love makes us so light and carefree. Welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:25:00 AM
Dankie too much rich. I think i'll enjoy the soup.