Patricia

Have a new friend, her name is Patricia From the start, she's befriended this old gorilla Her writings impress me too They're fresh and new How fortunate am I, she's like a sweet chinchilla

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/9/2017 8:35:00 AM

Well, I'll have to check her out//Her poems! You silly lout//All the girls do//get so sweet on you//If they didn't you would definitely pout////You old gorilla, or is it baboon?//Frisking chinchillas till noon//You must be tough//'cause you got it rough//with girlfriends all over the moon! (Wow, a two-fer. All on one cuppa!) SQUEEZE ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 9:05:00 AM

I am truly honoured doubly, good buddy!!! We have mastered this limerick thing, haven't we??? GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/9/2017 8:13:00 AM

LOL you are making me blush quite girlishly. Haven't done that in some time. Thank you kind sir for accolade. I will try to live up to it.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 8:56:00 AM

You should have no problem living up to my accolades! Friends come and go on the site... hope you stick around for a while! Love&Hugs, Jacko!! xxx

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/9/2017 8:19:00 AM

Oh by the way am having the hair problem taken care of next week. Now take your tongue out of your cheek and go eat breakfast.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2017 7:13:00 AM

What a dedication to your new friend! I surely enjoyed this incredible write today! You have impressed me with your loving nature my friend! Such a wonderful read, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/9/2017 7:21:00 AM

She is a loving soul! Hope she enjoys it here and sticks around!!! She brightens my day and others I'm sure!!!