Neil Johns Poet Haiku

Patricia - 4 Haiku

1.

Silloth, thousand miles
but closer considering 
how much we wanted.

2.

even car silence
was comfortable, ok
never dull moments.

3.

bedroom, who’d believe
this tiger waiting to pounce
to savage and maul.

4.

goodbye, train station
quick pic to prove it was real
coming again, true.

14.2.2020 23:15

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Sara Kendrick January 5, 2022 at 9:55 AM Interesting lines penned in this one. I am guessing it is about a love affair. I am glad I chose it to read today. Sara Neil Johns January 5, 2022 at 10:15 PM It is Sara and thank you. Silloth’s a place by the way. Neil