Patriarchy

He ruled his kingdom with an iron fist
all looked up to the earl of otherworld.
Women sighed over his handsome face,
his manly stature and his sense of humour.

His heir and son was cultivated and charming.
Yet the earl's wife was a fiery woman of red hair
with an hourglass figure she tempted and teased.
He was putty in her hands when she flirted.

His warriors would follow him to certain death
such was their trust in his leadership and skills.
His earldom was both strong and rich in arts,
jewels with bounteous harvests of fruit and grains.

His once many enemies were now scattered and few.
He gazed out over his kingdom and knew with certainty
that all was ready for the day he was no more
that his son would carry on capably in his footsteps.

He knew he would be remembered with relevance
that many would mourn his Rite of Passage
after all he was the patrician all he beheld
and he ruled all with wisdom and strength.

written 07/17/2015

contest Patriarchy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Superb write Shadow that's so worthy of great win! Big congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:04 PM
ty Dr Upma hugs
A  Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Shadow, congratulations. Forever **SKAT**
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:04 PM
ty Skat hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:44 AM
I agree with Andrea, this is very original.
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:04 PM
ty Rick hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:39 PM
I am just now seeing the note you left me. Why ever would you not consider entering this one?? It is so original, Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 5:18 AM
ty Andrea I was not totally happy with it hugs
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Love this, Shadow. a wonderful flow of words, and so very interesting to read..good luck
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:38 PM
ty Harry appreciated hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:06 AM
I like your take on the contest, great story telling!
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:37 PM
ty Rick hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:48 PM
wow, Shadow, I love the way that you did yours on a positive note. This is one of the nicest and most interesting of the ones that I have seen on this topic. Hope it places high!
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:50 AM
ty Andrea good to know you like it I was unsure about it and nearly did not enter it hugs
La France Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Shadow, you have penned an outstanding poem, well done 7 and I want to thank you so much for my fine placement in your ACBEC.... contest, I am very honored
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:49 AM
ty Connie you earned your place hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Great story. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:46 AM
ty Ravi hugs
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Lovely story with great imagery Shadow - good luck in the contest - this is the first poem I've managed to see for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:57 AM
ty Jan hugs
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