Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Patio Letdown

there’s something dreary
about a terrasse drenched in rain
can’t help but take it personally
like a missed invitation
to an afternoon drink with friends
or a cancelled party

a dull hush lacks warmth
too early or too late
no one at the rendez-vous
no welcoming sunshine
stood up by the host

a final rinse
the rain lets up
the earth on pause
before the sun breaks through
and sets everything on cue



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Susan Ashley July 12, 2025 at 9:42 AM Dear Line, your poem beautifully captures the melancholy of such rain-provoked dreary moments. Your last stanza resets the tone wonderfully. Indeed, with the return of the sun comes the return of vibrant life. I enjoyed this soulful/poetic afternoon snapshot and the anticipation of what's to follow.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Line Gauthier July 12, 2025 at 11:03 AM Thanks for your lovely comment, Susan. Most appreciated ~