Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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     * ... (Noah is pissed, tired and wet; MOVE ON ... HURRY UP !)

- Patience Test -

A terrible storm in wait
Caught by a laughing flood

While his beard grows
Several laborious hours

For the animals a floating rescue
A journey to a new adventure

Take your time
Time measured, analyzed and split


  












17.03.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
(unrhymed couplets)
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Phyllis Babcock March 30, 2017 at 11:31 AM Had me smiling on Noah waiting for the snails to board. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2017 at 12:33 PM - A funny picture, Phyllis - - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish March 21, 2017 at 4:52 PM Nice take on the biblical story! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2017 at 12:32 PM - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett March 21, 2017 at 8:34 AM Brilliant Anne-Lise, all comes to those who wait as long as they don't wait to long, great poem and picture, Roy, :)) Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2017 at 8:37 AM - Roy many thanks, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams March 20, 2017 at 4:00 AM Haha , this is a funny one Anne-Lise. and I love the picture. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2017 at 8:37 AM - Many thanks Maria, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nilima Deb March 19, 2017 at 8:54 AM good quote to be noted ...great and witty dear Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2017 at 9:27 AM - Many thanks Nilima, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam March 19, 2017 at 2:13 AM Excellent advise to all. So hurry up. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2017 at 8:58 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 18, 2017 at 3:53 PM Wow! A terrific poem, Anne-Lise. Not only is it funny (pic makes the words breathe laughter) but it is very existential in thought. Excellent deep thought poetry. Love and hugs for you. Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2017 at 8:53 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and your lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Kinch March 18, 2017 at 10:46 AM A fabulous fun write with a great picture to go with it :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 2:04 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 18, 2017 at 9:27 AM Hilarious my dear and witty! A seven dear, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 2:03 PM - Many thanks my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan March 18, 2017 at 4:52 AM Ha ha... A fun write Anne...You made me smile... Thanks for sharing...A big 7... Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 2:03 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 17, 2017 at 11:14 PM Was this when patience became a virtue? Funny Anne-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 2:00 PM - Yes that's right :))) - Many thanks Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie March 17, 2017 at 5:51 PM ...your funny bone is in overdrive Anne-Lise :-) ...this is fantastic! blessings, lynn ..enjoy a very happy weekend :-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 1:58 PM - Lynn, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 17, 2017 at 5:14 PM Good advise to all. I enjoyed your poem.Sunshine Smile. Love. Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 1:57 PM - Many thanks Darlene, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith March 17, 2017 at 4:55 PM Lol...cracked me up Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2017 at 1:53 PM - Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)