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Patience Is a Virtue

Patience is a virtue they say When trying to lose some weight Rome wasn't built in a day you known So have that wee piece of cake Slow and steady should be a motto To remember as you struggle each day There's no substitute for dedication Just keep at it come what may Eventually you'll see some progress Your feelings inside will explode Singing a song and clicking your heels But be sure you don't overload You've still got a lot of years ahead Make sure they're happy and free Free from the scourge of too many pounds And you'll get down to 303!

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Date: 8/24/2015 3:35:00 AM
Love this one Jack!! Everything takes time, and often that's difficult, particularly in this day and age when everyone wants everything right away! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/24/2015 7:18:00 AM
I am a very patient mind waiting to hear from my sweet sweet Miss Laura!!! Love ya dear Laura xxx

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