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Patience

Patience They say patience is a virtue. Agreed, But too much patience also turns to misfortune. Misfortune that deprives, misfortune that hurts. This ' patience' some have and some lack. Both are hurt by it, no leniency for either. How shrewd it is. How i hope to find a safe zone within this cunning one we call Patience. Too much patience also turns to misfortune. Misfortune that deprives, misfortune that hurts.

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Date: 7/13/2014 11:58:00 AM
Hi Lajorne, this is such a well-written piece with a powerful message! Well done!
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:59:00 PM
Lajorne, thanks for three+ views of patience. Good use of voice and message. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/11/2014 7:35:00 PM
I don't have much patience? So I guess I don't understand its use either? Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2014 8:10:00 AM
- Interesting thoughts about patience, Lajorne - well written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lajorne Ferguson
Date: 1/8/2014 9:22:00 PM
Thank you dear! ^_^

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