Patience

We call her Patience
grazing done
she heads for the barn
to wait her turn



written March 09, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Well done. Good one i love haiku to rhyme. Best Wihes
Poteet Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 5:14 AM
It is 17 syllables, should put it in three lines for the purists. Just a memoir for my granddaughter who loves cows (and their owner, her boyfriend)
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March 9, 2018 at 4:47 PM
I picture the cows gazing..slowly..taking their sweet time! Unique theme, RAP.
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March 10, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Thanks, so true. Part of the food chain which sustains life as we know it.
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