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Pathways In the Sky

Parallel smoky white lines carve paths as
passage marked 'cross cobalt sky;
homeward-bound seraphim.

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(C) John C Michaels, June 2017

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Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2017 at 1:17 PM

You paint a priceless picture with your beautiful imagery! What an enjoyable read! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels

July 1, 2017 at 5:23 AM

Thanks so much for your kind comments, Pandita!! All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2017 at 9:49 PM

hey John, I was looking for a poem I have not seen of yours and could not find one yet and now I need to get off here. Hopefully in the future I will find an oldie of yours to see!

John Michaels

June 25, 2017 at 4:19 AM

Thanks for the support, Andrea. Hopefully I'll post some new stuff soon. Regards, John.

Eve Roper

June 14, 2017 at 7:47 PM

Nicely done, John. You made me think of the planes that fly by and leave their trail of smoke in the air. and wish I was in one of those planes going anyplace... but not ready for the seraphim angels ~*

John Michaels

June 15, 2017 at 2:11 AM

Thanks for your kind comments, Eve. I don't normally write poems with a religious element, but the image just fit! Best regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2017 at 3:41 PM

Cool one, JOhn. Love that last line!!

John Michaels

June 15, 2017 at 2:10 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Pleased you liked it. Regards, John.

Connie Marcum Wong

June 14, 2017 at 6:40 AM

This is heavenly John. : )

John Michaels

June 14, 2017 at 1:25 PM

Thank you, Connie. Like what you did there! :) Regards, John.

Heidi Sands

June 9, 2017 at 1:08 PM

Beautiful John :)

John Michaels

June 12, 2017 at 6:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comments. All the best, John.

Lisa Ricci

June 3, 2017 at 5:04 AM

Good Morning John. Always are there paths in the sky. Paths that lead to all possibilities. Your entry and thoughts are marvelous. The imagery you allow the reader to see is grand. Wonderful entirely. Enjoy the morning and day.

John Michaels

June 4, 2017 at 12:39 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, Lisa. We need only look around us to garner inspiration, whether that be on the ground, in the sky or out at sea. All the best, John.