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Pathways In the Sky

Parallel smoky white lines carve paths as passage marked 'cross cobalt sky; homeward-bound seraphim. ------------------------------ (C) John C Michaels, June 2017

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2017 1:17:00 PM

You paint a priceless picture with your beautiful imagery! What an enjoyable read! Hugs. Pandita

John Michaels
Date: 7/1/2017 5:23:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind comments, Pandita!! All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2017 9:49:00 PM

hey John, I was looking for a poem I have not seen of yours and could not find one yet and now I need to get off here. Hopefully in the future I will find an oldie of yours to see!

John Michaels
Date: 6/25/2017 4:19:00 AM

Thanks for the support, Andrea. Hopefully I'll post some new stuff soon. Regards, John.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2017 7:47:00 PM

Nicely done, John. You made me think of the planes that fly by and leave their trail of smoke in the air. and wish I was in one of those planes going anyplace... but not ready for the seraphim angels ~*

John Michaels
Date: 6/15/2017 2:11:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comments, Eve. I don't normally write poems with a religious element, but the image just fit! Best regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:41:00 PM

Cool one, JOhn. Love that last line!!

John Michaels
Date: 6/15/2017 2:10:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Pleased you liked it. Regards, John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2017 6:40:00 AM

This is heavenly John. : )

John Michaels
Date: 6/14/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Like what you did there! :) Regards, John.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/9/2017 1:08:00 PM

Beautiful John :)

John Michaels
Date: 6/12/2017 6:00:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comments. All the best, John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2017 5:04:00 AM

Good Morning John. Always are there paths in the sky. Paths that lead to all possibilities. Your entry and thoughts are marvelous. The imagery you allow the reader to see is grand. Wonderful entirely. Enjoy the morning and day.

John Michaels
Date: 6/4/2017 12:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments, Lisa. We need only look around us to garner inspiration, whether that be on the ground, in the sky or out at sea. All the best, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2017 4:43:00 PM

You paint a vivid image of man-made planes, compared to 'heavenly beings', John. I like watching those silvery white lines. Regards // paul

John Michaels
Date: 6/4/2017 12:37:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Was nice to let my imagination take over and embellish the origins of the wispy trails in the sky! Regards, John.