Pathway To Heaven

pathway to heaven
swinging near eternity
pure souls might enter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 11:42 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry Tahera. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Tahera, love the imagery in your wonderful poem. It seems that we were on a similar wave length while writing our Haiku! Best of luck in the contest! Have a great weekend! Always, Annalise
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 2:36 PM
Wonderful, I too thought of the swinging imagery(from a swinging bridge of my childhood) but not sure how to do it yet. LUv, andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 10:07 AM
I really like the spiritual approach you took, Tahera. When I saw the picture, my first thought was "pathway to heaven." We're thinking alike, but I haven't written my entry yet. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:52 AM
An excellent approach to the contest picture Tahera.Enjoyed--kashinath
Tacito Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Heh..."might enter". Indeed. Excellent lines, Tahera!
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 6:18 AM
beautifully read picture and its apt interpretation, the conclusion being a bliss to the pure souls, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Wonderful words Tahera my friend for the photo of the new contest depiction... truly it exudes the pathway to Heaven and much to ponder in your lines..good luck with luv..
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