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Pathway To Forgiveness

look up in the sky a lone star illuminates... love and mercy

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/17/2010 4:21:00 PM

congrats ton the win!! Merry Christmas!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2010 3:16:00 PM

Great topic chosen..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2010 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest "Haiku Me A Christmas Tree" Wilma. Love, Carol

Dzana Madagu

Date: 12/6/2010 7:29:00 AM

Wilma, this is an amazing piece you've got. The three lines carry enough weight on their own. The 'lone Star' was a sign for the Wise Men, to guide them to the location of the King of Kings and the Saviour of the World- Jesus, when He was born. His coming to earth has brought Joy and Hope to a gloomy world. He is love and mercy personified. Do you know how powerful this Haiku piece is?? Am I right in thinking that this poem won a competition?

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 6:37:00 PM

Congrats! On your win! Enjoyed the moment of reading your poetry.LUV~SKAT

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 11:12:00 AM

Many congrats Wilma on picking up coveted spot in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/5/2010 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Wilma!! Beautiful image! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2010 8:06:00 AM

Congrats dear Wilma friend on your super win in Andrea's cool contest with this excellent and expressive entry .. enjoy another sweet victory with luv.. and super thankxx for some heat... oh ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2010 6:38:00 AM

wonderfu; 'ku.. cheers and thanks for your wishes, wilma!! nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Andrea, Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/5/2010 5:03:00 AM

One of my favs from the day you wrote it.. congrats on your success my love....Lu Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 9:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Wilma. I love this one -- quite an image.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2010 5:00:00 PM

congratulations, WIlma, one of the most reverent messages in the contest!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/29/2010 1:23:00 AM

Any man who forgiveness has failed to govern, is a sadist. great way to convince the hard minded man.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:33:00 PM

Lovely thought at the end, good choice with illuminates:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 1:04:00 AM

Nice message, Wilma. (illuminates) I never look at my contest entries till last minute but I am guessing this might be for my contest? If so, thanks for your support. And I'm glad you enjoyed my newest poem. LUv, andrea

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/27/2010 10:01:00 PM

Love and mercy........great feelings,Wilma.Sweet write.

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/26/2010 7:37:00 PM

The Morning Star! Ever bright! Wonderful Haiku about love and mercy and from whom they flow! Much love, Audrey

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/26/2010 7:14:00 PM

Very nice Wilma. I expect that star will be growing brighter every night.Thank you for reading and commenting on my haiku. Lov, Joyce

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/26/2010 5:59:00 PM

nice my freind

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2010 4:42:00 PM

Especially at this time of year dear Wilma.. time for forgiveness and for looking up to Heaven and the one STAR that shines brightest luv.. a wonderful Haiku my friend.. happy weekend..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2010 4:23:00 PM

Great one.. I am so glad that Love and Mercy found me..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/26/2010 4:21:00 PM

This sure is very inspiring and I love how you make this as a beautiful reminder to all who read it :) hope your weekend's gonna be good-- or haha that you would be good ;) -- see you missy :) I'm gonna be hiding in a bit :) --hugs nikko :)

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/26/2010 12:56:00 PM

Dear Wilma.A very illuminating Haiku.And you cannot have mercy without love.We can shine here on earth by projecting these truths in our lives.I love your title,just those three words have captured me.They speak volumes as does the rest of this profound piece.I am so glad you liked my 'One for All'I am so grateful I was able to share it with you.Thank you so much.Love June (S)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2010 12:50:00 PM

Devotional write with good faith, Wilma