Paths

New Contest: New or Old poems, Beautiful, 10 lines or less 1st the paths we take, the thirsts we slake, the crimson flush desire, thoughts sometimes do inward make, the embers fan the fire... Don Johnson thanks p d

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/8/2011 4:20:00 AM

Like it! Congratulations on your win x

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/7/2011 7:17:00 PM

Good work, Don. Congratulations. Lvoe, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 5:24:00 PM

Excellent rhyme and rhythm in this one, Don. A big congratulations to you.

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/7/2011 2:38:00 PM

Well said Don. Top notch. Congratulations

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/7/2011 2:15:00 PM

Good one, Don. Congrats on your win in the contest. I also want to thank you for your kind comments on my poem "God's Gifts". I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Don. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 12:14:00 PM

Don congrats on your great win, very true mate..David

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 12/4/2011 8:02:00 PM

Your all guns a blazing...good stuff Don

Debra Squyres

Date: 12/4/2011 5:33:00 PM

Enjoyed !!!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/3/2011 2:52:00 PM

Don you amaze me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2011 8:49:00 AM

Good one..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..I especially like the last two lines..Thanks for the comments on my work "The Question"...Just had to write that one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2011 8:34:00 AM

Good morning Don~ i like the crimson look,, but, will stay away from the thirst... a mighty path mine has been enjoyed,..p.d.