Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Paths

New Contest: New or Old poems, Beautiful, 10 lines or less 1st

the paths we take,
the thirsts we slake,
the crimson flush desire,
thoughts sometimes do inward make,
the embers fan the fire...


Don Johnson



thanks p d

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 8, 2011 at 4:20 AM Like it! Congratulations on your win x

Joyce Johnson December 7, 2011 at 7:17 PM Good work, Don. Congratulations. Lvoe, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2011 at 5:24 PM Excellent rhyme and rhythm in this one, Don. A big congratulations to you.

Bob Quigley December 7, 2011 at 2:38 PM Well said Don. Top notch. Congratulations

Kim Merryman December 7, 2011 at 2:15 PM Good one, Don. Congrats on your win in the contest. I also want to thank you for your kind comments on my poem "God's Gifts". I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2011 at 12:22 PM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Don. Love, Carol

David Williams December 7, 2011 at 12:14 PM Don congrats on your great win, very true mate..David

Lizzie Treetop December 4, 2011 at 8:02 PM Your all guns a blazing...good stuff Don

Debra Squyres December 4, 2011 at 5:33 PM Enjoyed !!!

Tony Lane December 3, 2011 at 2:52 PM Don you amaze me.

Sara Kendrick December 3, 2011 at 8:49 AM Good one..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..I especially like the last two lines..Thanks for the comments on my work "The Question"...Just had to write that one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A December 3, 2011 at 8:34 AM Good morning Don~ i like the crimson look,, but, will stay away from the thirst... a mighty path mine has been enjoyed,..p.d.