Pathivara God
sitting at the top of mountain
wants her children to gain success
Don't think about own benefits
struggle to give all warmth and success
strive for other happiness
forget about own aims
care all people as her children
After being success her children
won't appreciate
Thinks about other
but she don't know society is to cruel
which always aims to satisfy own intention
God loves all very much
try to appreciate for them
because they are the pathway of
happiness and success
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