Pathetic Man

Sad pathetic man
Separated from God above
Longing, unfilled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Nice write Sara>>James
Mckenzie Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Sara~I'm sure this message what hit many people sharing in those feelings! Well done God is waiting for him! Laura :0)
Dvorkis Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 7:08 AM
As much as I'd love to let it slide, I can't eally this time Sara. your sad pathetic man is just as separated from God as you and I are. Anyone who still holds fear and hate in their hearts don't know God. I hate to be so blunt but there really is no way around this. we're all in this together, no man or woman is more or less sad and pathetic then all the rest. I do understand if you're targeting someone specifically, not the entire opposite sex...
Christian Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 7:03 AM
aww but God loves all people so this man would not be seperated from God totaly , but a good write, we all fall short of God's Glory but we all are a work in progress, this man will do just fine with God's help, pray for him, God bless from diane
Higgins Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 4:06 AM
whenever you are separated from God it can be a sad experience..good work.
Malebranche Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 3:54 AM
This is very true...once we seperate ourselves from God, we are only setting up ourselves for failure...Beautiful piece
Burton Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 3:47 AM
wow... I'm gonna pray for this guy... chech out my recent writing! its about painting and so on.... it explains our moods and colors.. enjoy your day!:)
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