Path To the Wisdom

The path to the wisdom

I was in love with a flower; now I am in love with light.
I escaped from pain and sorrow, even though was such delight.
I told my story in secret to all the birds and bees;
The light that I fell in love with it always brightens our night.
Your love is the source of brightness; your warmth engulfs the soul.
Your shine clears the darkness, and lovers will win the fight.
I and all Swallows together are looking for the spring.
We got lost in the autumn, but the winter is cold and fright.
We didn’t see the twilight; we lived in the longest night.
The dawn of tomorrow will make our day so bright.
The breeze told the flowers, Ask, Listen and Trust;
Follow your path to wisdom until we will all unite.
My part in this story is the tiniest part, indeed.
The nature wrote the story because nobody else can write. 

12/2015
Pashang Salehi  “ Haloo”

For the contest, Poetry Writing #1, sponsor Broken Wings
The form that I chose is called “GHAZAL.”

It is an old traditional Persian style of poetry with a fixed number of lines (between five and fifteen lines). Each line consists of two half verses or (Mesra). Each line must have the same length and syllables (weight). In the first line, both half verses must rhyme (sometimes followed by a refrain). In the subsequent lines, the second half verse rhymes with the same style with every line. Ghazal expresses the pain of loss and the beauty of love. It is usually ambiguous, and the reader can connect to the poem with their version of understanding and interpretation. I Love Ghazal because I love Hafez, the greatest Persian Poet who ever lived and the true master of Ghazal.

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Date: 2/15/2016 8:16:00 AM
Wonderful Ghazal.I enjoyed it. Regarding the poem you visited, as I explained to the next visitor , it was about the form and content of any poetry.Actually it is difficult to touch both (ideas and form: round...) as you did and proved it again.Best wishes.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/18/2016 1:08:00 PM
Hi Ovidiu, Thank you for reading my Ghazal. It is perhaps the hardest style of poetry if you want to do it correctly. I can do it in Persian language much easier than English. I don't remember which poem of yours, you're talking about since I've read a lot of you poems. Pashang
Date: 12/18/2015 10:26:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely form Pashang.. hv always loved ghazals but never written one.. Congrats on big win!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Doctor, try it and see.... and please let me know when you're done.
Date: 12/18/2015 9:32:00 PM
Pashang, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT**
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thank you SKAT for reading my Ghazal....
Date: 12/18/2015 9:17:00 PM
Pashang, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:22:00 PM
It's great that you are so passionate about this form. I have only done it once or twice but it's a great form, as I recall. Good job with this poem. Congrats for your win.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/18/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, I read your poem that you entered as well. To me poetry is different from writing bunch of words, rearranging them and adding a syllable here and there. There are writers and there are poets, and I am trying to figure who is who and what am I doing.
Date: 12/18/2015 2:23:00 PM
A delightful form and I love your explanation Pashang - i may give this style a try:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/19/2015 1:13:00 PM
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