Path To An Unknown Destination

As I travel on the path to an unknown destination.......
I must conquer the process of never-ending education
Average math pupil but good with money multiplication
So I try hard to keep rigid concentration
Don't need drugs or liquor to grant my brain stimulation
The elevation
Of my irritation
Anger accumulation
If I fail a task I feel internal humiliation
So I'm up to my neck with worries about to die from self-strangulation
Self termination
My own extermination
Then next comes the inevitable inflammation
So I face Heaven's cremation
Now in Hell I witness my soul's incarceration and incineration
I seek some solitude, give me my space-indentaion
I'm confident a star without the constellation
Better yet I'm the Earth minus the rotation
Circle the 7 continents-circumnavigation
Rebuild my nation
Who am I kidding that's my imagination
An indication
Of dedication
Inspiration
Which mingles with frustration
Which is an expectation
Of this generation
But I am forever notorius I welcome seperation
Fighting two on one with anticipation and contemplation
Losing the battle my face scarred beyond mutilation
Something bad in my blood I feel the devestation
Of living with contamination bad sanitation
Takin no hesitation to carry out the investigation
Now its too late, notice the mutation
Now I take over the land-gentrification
Build a foundation
Living quarters get the best renovation
See my creation
The ultimate innovation
Shine so bright my life is your illumination
In my dreams my company names me president without the inaugeration
Good luck to my relations and affiliations
The eradication
Of my station
Completing installation and insulation
With collasal temptation
To put my feelins in isolation
My heart has no visitations
Readers form your own interpretations.......
Life is a simulation
With many manifestations
Still on a path to an unknown destination


 (Took 47 sec to start typing)(Typed in 22 min, 12:53-1:15) 8-25-09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/22/2009 1:39:00 PM
Wow! I'M OUT OF BREATH!!!! YOU ARE SURE TO BE A RAPPER!!!!! LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE SIMONE
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:37:00 AM
I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Richard. I thank you for sharing your writing. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2009 12:06:00 PM
Sounds like you have some perfectionistic tendencies. Usually a good trait for writers. Like the rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/25/2009 11:33:00 AM
This is very good..love the rhyming flow in the piece..I could feel the beat coming alive in my head as i read.
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