Notes About The Poem

Path of War

The rain arrives
As forecast.

War pays no attention 
To the rain.

Rivers of blood
Flow undiluted to the sea.

Ocean tides
Pay no attention to war.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:40 PM
You have made your point well, Chetta.
Achara Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Thank you.
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