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The rain arrives As forecast. War pays no attention To the rain. Rivers of blood Flow undiluted to the sea. Ocean tides Pay no attention to war.

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Date: 11/23/2023 8:40:00 PM
You have made your point well, Chetta.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 11/25/2023 6:18:00 PM
Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs