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Path of Life

Path of Life

Roaming down the path of life
Taking steps to avoid strife 
Sometimes reaching a dead end
Losing the love of a best friend
Starting on another path
Hoping it’s better than the last

Seeking happiness all of the time
Wishing for someone to call mine
A sharing- love and laughter kind
Someone with whom I truly rhyme
Making life beautifully sublime

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2019 8:36:00 AM

My pleasure Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/3/2019 1:27:00 PM

A very happy poem. Love Someone with whom I truly rhyme...so cute!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/6/2019 5:43:00 PM

Great to hear from you, Kim. Glad that you picked up on the joy.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2019 9:20:00 AM

You express longing eloquently.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/26/2019 10:21:00 AM

Richard, I always appreciate your visit and critique. Thanks~ Warren

Niyna Desangre

Date: 6/23/2019 9:39:00 PM

The Path of Life... one of the crowdest loneliest paths I've traveled... I just bumped into a person I'd traveled with years before...for the 3rd time; must be the one! Sometimes the one is there... their light may not shine brightly as expected... due to time and wear! You just gotta light that pilot. I'll be looking forward to your happy ending...Best to you!

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:57:00 AM

Niyna, your comment is full of wisdom. I'll keep the pilot light burning. All the best~ Warren.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/8/2019 3:22:00 AM

More than a wonderful poem. There is the person you want, just waiting for you. Love, Panagiota

Warren Doll
Date: 6/9/2019 1:05:00 PM

Panagiota, such kind comments and visit. Warm wishes~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2019 4:59:00 AM

A beautiful heartfelt poem - a call from within the depths of your being to find a soulmate - truly hope you do, there will be someone who will realize your worth when you least expect it Warren, Hugs, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/9/2019 1:02:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, thanks so much for your kind comment and visit. Kind wishes~ Warren

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/20/2019 12:21:00 PM

A nice penned piece Warren, great rhyme and flow too, hope you find the sought for happiness. Blessings,Gordon

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 8:00:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Gordon. Thanks for your positive comments. All the Best~ Warren

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/19/2019 9:41:00 AM

I really like this, true to life and, I hope your wishes come true :)

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 8:02:00 PM

Hi Heidi, great to hear from you. Glad you liked it.~ Warren

Robertina B.

Date: 5/13/2019 1:45:00 PM

I really enjoyed your rhyme, Warren.. So wonderful and filled with optimism.. A lovely Path of Life, my friend.. Have a blessed day!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/17/2019 10:59:00 AM

Hi Robertina, great to hear from you. Thanks for you positive comments and for your visit. All the best~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/29/2019 3:47:00 PM

You just have to keep writing poetry like this and a lady will be wooed with your words Warren. Someone who can share love and laughter...she is out there waiting to meet you. Keep asking for happiness and it will become manifest. I know, that is what I did forty years ago. I love your poem! You are on the right path my friend. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 5/9/2019 11:46:00 AM

Hi Connie, it's always great to hear from you. Thank you for your great advice and comments. I'm glad that you loved the poem. All the best~ Warren :)))

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/25/2019 4:38:00 PM

May such a beautiful wish come true for you my friend. An inspiring and joyful piece you have created.. A fav..

Warren Doll
Date: 4/29/2019 9:30:00 AM

Hi Robert, thanks so much for your kind words. I'm honored that you consider this a fav. All the best~ Warren

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2019 1:11:00 AM

I hope your wish comes true and you meet that special (whether true or fiction). Your poem are explicit, powerful and moresome - read over the poem twice. Great write Warren. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Warren Doll
Date: 4/29/2019 9:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jennifer. It's always great to hear from you. Thanks for your support~Warren