Haiku Dragon Poet Light Verse

Path of a Burn

A Dribble a Trickle a Dram a Splash
Flowing Down a Brae Past the Steading 
Rushing Over Rocks Creating Crag and Tails
Waves Wash and Bleather on the Bank 
Water Shimmers and Shines in the Sunlight so Braw 
Dinnlin the Earth and Trees as it Flows 
Over Moor and Though Glen Toward Linn and Loch
Eventually Passing a Stone-Thrust and Becoming the Sea 
This is the Path of a Burn.

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Keith Bickerstaffe April 28, 2012 at 12:55 PM There's a wonderful flow here, as we might expect! Nice assonance and alliteration propelling your 'burn' to its final destination. Well done, Dave! Best wishes, Keith

Sara Kendrick February 20, 2012 at 1:40 PM Very descriptive..Makes me understand those words that descriptive or tell about that part of the world..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2012 at 6:14 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dave. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse February 17, 2012 at 7:17 AM Well enjoyed the educational poem.....never thought of burn in that sense.....enjoyed!