Path

Not every light can be a savior
So in the darkness i might waver

Talents considered at every seem
But not a one has a redeeming dream
Static gems glisten in blood
A status icon pulled from mud

Those with the power to change are happy where they are
Less for them if we go far
But still ill try to have it all
The power of change is worth the fall

So guide me now wavering light
Give me the power to save in this dark night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 10:56 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Jimmi. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Well expressed thoughts nicely rhymed, Jimmi
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August 8, 2010 at 7:26 PM
enjoyed reading...Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you have a well of inspiration to give your poetic work. check out some of my works if you dare...I need a fresh victim.
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