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PASTING PASSION ON PANORAMA Watching frigid fountain from rigid mountain cascading in opulence splashing, thrashing, gurgling on pebbles rumbling. Golden yellow sunflower blooms blossoms frolic cheerful smiles at Sun, nods head, greets butterfly to kiss. Darling! We exchange delighted glances, playing with restless fingers. Sweetest kiss, the best award on closest amorous touch. Roaming on romantic aroma in rim of stream of dream. Our whispers harmonizing on rustle of leaves and murmur of breeze. Dear, you are dear gem: Light of my mind not light but bright to reflect. Prompt hesitant imprisoned feelings fly free on outdoor romance. Feel sole desire of my soul: Fill your heart: Don’t hurt my ego. Bubbling blood in flood troubling wobbling heart n trembling pulses. Present pleasure drops like dew drops as present on rose petals. Loitering in garden of Eden, I wish to wander like Romeo. My emerald emotion, crimson passion, lavender love adorns you in elegance. I know, I love you most and I love most to know you. I long to live for you and determined to die for you. My lust ablaze on flame in cool calm quiet ambient. Sheen Sun seen to shine, sure to set on same schedule with promise of rise on next dawn with vivacious vigor: No surprise. Lines: 1.Internal Rhyme 2. Onomatopoeia 3. Pleonasm 4. personification 5. Parallelism 6. Superlative 7. Euphony 8. Simile 9. Homonyms 10. Oxymoron 11. Homophones 12. Consonance 13. Homographs 14. Allusion 15. Ambiguity 16. Paradox. 17. Juxtaposition. 18. Irony 19. Alliteration 20. Truism. 'A Litany of Poetic Devices' Contest by Line Gauthier

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Date: 9/14/2018 5:38:00 AM
oh sweet Anisha! This was great all around. Congrats! :)-luloo
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/14/2018 11:42:00 PM
Thanks n hugs.
Date: 9/13/2018 2:54:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Anisha. A lovely poem to read with excellent lines. Thanks for entering this challenging contest. Well done.
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