Pastels

hallucinogenic hues
span the river and the sky
culminating in explosive
rhythm of the sun

10/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 6:56 PM
this is gorgeous, Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 11:13 PM
You have certainly nailed this one! Bravo! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Nicole Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Simply breathtaking. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. :) Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Thank you, Brandy!
Bellam Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Beautiful imagery, love your contrasts and power so simply yet explosively put.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Warrior Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Excellent Dodoitsu Kimmy...great flow...love & light...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Thanks, my friend!!
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 8:40 AM
This works - there's a lovely rhythm to this little gem.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:31 AM
You have the best descriptive words bouncing off your poetry Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you so much, sweet lady!
Kiser Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 4:51 AM
That was beautifully penned.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 3:47 AM
- Lovely, Kim :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, dear poetess!
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