Pastel Blues

Such
sadness
in her eyes-
almost hear her
sighs

Portrait of Marie Swarzenski by Max beckmann 1884-1950

http://www.staedelmuseum.de/sm/index.php?StoryID=258
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Brilliant piece and the painting...Raul
Shango Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 7:12 AM
There is a genius to your write, but greater the genius in your looking ... one feels almost a reverence here ... great as usual
Bird Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 9:10 PM
This is breathtaking........ very sweet! Thank you for your lovely comments on my poetry, much appreciated always. charlene
Mckenzie Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Brian you brought this painting to life! well done! Laura :)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 2:06 PM
That is a perfect poem for the painting. Once again, you have said so much with so few words. You are very talented. (I suppose that you know that already, but I also suppose that it is nice to hear. So, it's an excellent choice of words.) Thank for your comment on my poems. Always, Dane
Winter Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Hauntingly sad, those eyes. Perfect poem for the portrait. Such talent to capture the inside of a person on the outside. Such talent to make us actually hear what I imagine to be her hopeless sighs, in your poem. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Just took a look at this painting.....so well described....yes...can hear the sound of her breath...the sadness.
Higgins Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 4:18 AM
This entire piece is great..the sadness coming from her eyes so strongly that it would have an effect on the one looking at it..very strong.
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