Pastel Blues

Such
sadness
in her eyes-
almost hear her
sighs

Portrait of Marie Swarzenski by Max beckmann 1884-1950

http://www.staedelmuseum.de/sm/index.php?StoryID=258

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/23/2009 12:22:00 AM
Brilliant piece and the painting...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2009 7:12:00 AM
There is a genius to your write, but greater the genius in your looking ... one feels almost a reverence here ... great as usual
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 9:10:00 PM
This is breathtaking........ very sweet! Thank you for your lovely comments on my poetry, much appreciated always. charlene
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 3:45:00 PM
Brian you brought this painting to life! well done! Laura :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 2:06:00 PM
That is a perfect poem for the painting. Once again, you have said so much with so few words. You are very talented. (I suppose that you know that already, but I also suppose that it is nice to hear. So, it's an excellent choice of words.) Thank for your comment on my poems. Always, Dane
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 10:17:00 AM
Hauntingly sad, those eyes. Perfect poem for the portrait. Such talent to capture the inside of a person on the outside. Such talent to make us actually hear what I imagine to be her hopeless sighs, in your poem. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 7:07:00 AM
Just took a look at this painting.....so well described....yes...can hear the sound of her breath...the sadness.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 4:18:00 AM
This entire piece is great..the sadness coming from her eyes so strongly that it would have an effect on the one looking at it..very strong.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter