Past, Present, Future

I walk thinking about my unforgettable history
I stop walking thinking about how i am going to survive Now
Yet, I'll have to walk to continue my journey somehow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Nice creative thoughts on past, present and future, Kaila
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Wonderful words ..enjoyed the creativity of your expressive but check your form as Senryu is a 5/7/5 syllable count on Soup and this perhaps would be more Free Verse as a form for your write..luv.. happy Sunday...with luv..
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September 12, 2010 at 7:18 AM
Walk and it will all make sense...Michael
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