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Mistakes we have made cannot be erased Some leave us with a heavy price to be paid We all do and say things that we now regret But can’t undo those actions that we’d rather forget We cannot change what happened yesterday So must live for the moment and cherish each day We only get one chance at life … that’s a sure thing None of us can predict what the future will bring So we must use our time wisely all our days on this earth Try to live life to the full from the time of our birth Contest Past Present and Future Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron 22~11~16

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Date: 11/30/2016 3:40:00 PM
Lovely flow to these wise words Jan. Well done.
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/26/2016 6:56:00 PM
Congrats well-done x great poem x
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/26/2016 11:06:00 AM
A beautiful poem on a beautiful and simple truth that is so cussing word hard to actually pull off. We cannot and must not stop trying. This is your soft, talented and lyrical pen. I appreciate this gem and wish you the luck that you don't need. Again, beautiful ... CayCay
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Date: 11/26/2016 1:18:00 PM
Many thanks as ever CayCay I do appreciate all your support:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/26/2016 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jan Short sweet and wise, Kai
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Date: 11/26/2016 1:18:00 PM
Many thanks Kai:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/25/2016 7:49:00 AM
Past, Present, Future. The mood must have been tense?
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Date: 11/25/2016 11:22:00 AM
It sure is Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2016 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jan! Yes, we all have regrets, but we better make sure we live to the fullest :)
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Date: 11/25/2016 6:48:00 AM
I agree Darren... live for today who knows what tomorrow may bring:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2016 6:56:00 PM
Loved it! Congratulation on the win, Jan!
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Date: 11/24/2016 10:11:00 PM
Thanks Tamal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2016 6:51:00 PM
Good folksy wisdom, Jan. Amen to the truth of your words. Good words to live by ... a potent write you gave us. Ty for sharing. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 11/24/2016 10:11:00 PM
Thanks Freddie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2016 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations Jan on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 11/24/2016 4:28:00 PM
Wow many thanks Nayda I am delighted to place so well in your contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/23/2016 2:27:00 PM
Nice job kiddo :) It's too bad we do not have a delete button for uncomfortable memories.
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Date: 11/23/2016 2:46:00 PM
that true Ed but hopefully we can learn from mistakes from the past and not make them again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/23/2016 8:21:00 AM
Good advice, Jan:) so sad I could not enter the contest:(
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Date: 11/23/2016 8:28:00 AM
Oh were you too late:-(:-( that happened to me with Anthony's last contest:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/23/2016 7:51:00 AM
nicely done. The past helps create us as we grow and live. The present is where we continue to learn. and enjoy each moment and cherish love we share The future is never promised but hoped for in life. 'nicely penned
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Date: 11/23/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Bonnie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 4:29:00 PM
I hate the overused idiom YOLO but it's true, the past might haunt us, and the future is out of our control, living in the moment is best, albeit difficult. Sage directives Jan!
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Date: 11/22/2016 4:33:00 PM
I never use that term Paloma so I agree living in the moment is best we have no control over what has happened or will happen in the future:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 3:03:00 PM
Profound message that each of us must comprehend dear, Jan. Wonderfully expressed.
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Date: 11/22/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
I say, have as much fun as you can and leave as little time as possible to regret it. Spending time wisely is where most of us fail. Very meaningful poem, Jan:)
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Date: 11/22/2016 12:04:00 PM
wise words indeed Daniel:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 11:14:00 AM
Well written and very poetic x
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Date: 11/22/2016 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 10:26:00 AM
Hi Jan, There is so much truth within this piece. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/22/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Alexis :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 9:04:00 AM
So much truth flows through your beautiful poem. We can't change the past and can't predict the future, all we have is today and we need o make the best of it. Nicely done Jan
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:57:00 AM
Yes I agree Chris - my hubbies cancer was a reality check for us we grab every opportunity we can as we know how life can be so unpredictable - one thing I know for sure our health is the most precious thing we have along with family and friends:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/22/2016 8:45:00 AM
good luck jan, in the comp
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:58:00 AM
I have so many Stephen it's just no one sees them except for the sponsors.:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2016 8:49:00 AM
Jan does not get n/a
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Date: 11/22/2016 8:47:00 AM
I wonder if I can predict my place on the winners list lol or will it be yet another n/a lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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