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Past Memories

Memories return A persistent rash on the skin Dirty fingernails Whispers and echoes of mind Represent care of some kind

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Darren White

Date: 2/19/2017 10:28:00 AM

I remember.... I remember waking up that day, flooded by memories I didn't want... I luckily had that care from your last line. I am deliberately interpreting your tanka literally, because I cannot do otherwise here. Sorry for being so cryptic.

Darren White
Date: 2/19/2017 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, John :)

John Herlihy
Date: 2/19/2017 11:28:00 AM

The tanka is yours. With readers (and writers) like you, it's worth every bit the effort. John