Past Life

In past life I hailed from Shitterton 
and loved good food and plenty of action
Once a witch visited town
Who taught her art to me clown
With my magic wand I had more fun

A lass named Bustyview took my fancy
Gave me no airs, vane was her beauty
Decided to trick her in
Prince became I to her grin 
Lived thereafter happily with she

Form: Limerick, 2 stanzas of 5 lines each 
(syl. count:9,10,7,7,9,10,9,7,7,9), Rhyme: AABBA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 3:01 PM
ahh those busty women always causing trouble. Light & Love
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:50 PM
Debbie, thanks for the like but Carolyn got better enteries for her contest and they were all deserving winners. Mohan
Kiser Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 2:17 PM
That was fun. Thanks for the read.
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:51 PM
MLK, Thanks for your visit again and the like. Appreciate. Mohan
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Very interesting that you chose limerick form for that past lives contest. I can't think of a THING to submit for that contest!!
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:53 PM
My only effort was to make it light and have fun. Thanks for liking it Andrea.
May Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Very nice limerick Mohan..
Chutani Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:54 PM
Joseph, Thanks for enjoying it. Mohan
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