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Past and Present

The image girl Rolling into oblivion Only stopping to say goodbye Before she dies Her body sculptured Marble skin that men admire Cocooned in beauty and grace Dressed in sequins and lace Only her eyes betray A past that no elegance can hide The dirt under her nails, hidden But the reminiscence ingrained The past and the present Beat a different heart One stronger today One stronger tomorrow Today, they bask in her glory Wishing her beauty would rub off A photograph in her presence An autograph to cherish The past was always stronger Chipping away from within Taking her back to the dirt Where conception was forced in blood-soaked fields The end was always the legend Portraying a different past from the present Fairytales always have to end in splendour Otherwise, the children cry.

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Date: 6/28/2025 1:14:00 AM
Great one dear friend. I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and for dropping to read likewise. Hugs God bless.
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Date: 6/27/2025 4:22:00 PM
Interesting how you dug up the dirt, Paul.
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Date: 6/22/2025 2:44:00 PM
People are scared of sad endings and ignore the entire narrative in search of a perfect end. Alas, the end is just one part of the whole story. What about the start, the rising action, the climax, the calm before the storm? These are all moments in life to be cherished. There will always be ups and downs in the past and the present and the future for the image girl. Even though her present seemed perfect, the past still haunted her. Loved the message of your poem, Hiba :)
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Paul Bell
Date: 6/23/2025 2:35:00 AM
Yeah, for some the past just chips away at them, and no amount of success can change that.
Date: 6/14/2025 9:15:00 AM
Nothing good can stay. I got the quote wrong but it's from a famous book I can't even recall the title of. So true, Paul.
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Paul Bell
Date: 6/19/2025 10:51:00 AM
Nothing good comes after midnight. Maybe not. lol
Date: 6/2/2025 12:53:00 PM
- Wise words of truth, Paul - Excellently written :) - hugs
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Paul Bell
Date: 6/7/2025 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Anne.

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