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stupid & regardless of your rapping quietly on the door- you know the password but i want more- so, i, tapping tongues & scraping lungs, saunter to the center, tempting you to enter- expecting hospitality, you move thru, missing a shoe- my malady whimpers asks 'what do i do?' fills the air with fear- with much care you come near, spitting words & spinning worlds so fast such ease- unbeknownst you've stolen my swallowed keys.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 6:53:00 PM
Dear Rachel- I Agree with the below comment--WOW! The visions these words are painting are truly phenominal and I found it opened up the readers mind and imagination. At least that's what it did for me. Best Wishes to You~ Peace~ James
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:48:00 PM
Wow! Rachel, that is puting it out there. Enjoyed your poem,..p..d
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