Passivity An Open Form

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

PASSIVITY
looking
 passing through
an idealised
alternative
 sensibiliy
meditates
on the
entirety
a
denial
of
a
 discernble
imposition

diverse
 constraints
in
the
 rigorous
 recognition
 of the literal
 possibility
 of insight

such
a
 reflective
stumulation
in
a considered
framework
both
authentic & justified

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