Passivity An Open Form
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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment
PASSIVITY
looking
passing through
an idealised
alternative
sensibiliy
meditates
on the
entirety
a
denial
of
a
discernble
imposition
diverse
constraints
in
the
rigorous
recognition
of the literal
possibility
of insight
such
a
reflective
stumulation
in
a considered
framework
both
authentic & justified
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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