Passion's Concerto-Itty Bitty

With wondrous eyes of a darker hue
Do you not see the sun's setting shine?
Behind mountain tops, high in the blue
To see each cloud, as they try to hide
In meadows, humming birds slow flight
to gaze on beauty, as you pass by
Stars flicker with a deeper sigh,
hiding eyes, from being blinded by you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 11, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Frederic, :) Congratulations, In Andrea's Itty bitty contest.... Goodnight ~ Linda
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April 11, 2014 at 10:16 PM
thank you Linda for your kindness
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April 11, 2014 at 1:30 PM
- Congratulations on your 5nd place "Itty Bitty" poems, Frederic !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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April 11, 2014 at 1:59 PM
thank you my friend, yes I just had one that dropped out in the cornish sonnet contest..You too have a nice weekend...Frederic
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April 10, 2014 at 10:37 PM
a very romantic one blending in he elements of nature. congrats to you in my contest.
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April 11, 2014 at 10:46 AM
thank you Andrea for your friendship and kindness
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April 8, 2014 at 3:57 AM
Awesome write.. what we miss in nature's splendor and more xx~Xx
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April 8, 2014 at 8:41 AM
thank you for your kindness
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April 4, 2014 at 5:30 PM
This a fantastic piece Frederic...kudos Tim
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April 4, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Thank you Tim for reading and for your kindness
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