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Dramatize the Desires Poetry Contest

5/6/2026

Sponsor: Ink Empress

 

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Passioned

Within this ossuary of our breath,
Where time devours the very vows we swore.
I seek a love that triumphs over death,
and haunts the shadows of the evermore.

The sun is but a dying ember’s glare,
as midnight creeps to claim our fleeting light.

The heavy scent of sorrow fills the air,
And pulls us down into the hollow night.

Yet, let the worms consume this fragile shell,
And let the heavens turn to bitter stone,
If in the furnace where our spirits dwell,
I need not face the blackened void alone.

Though all the stars to dusty silence part,
I pray my love, to hold me in your heart.
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May 15, 2026 at 1:20 AM
This is such a poignant and soul stirring poem, I felt the emotions and i loved your wordplay and metphors as well as the flow of your poem, truly moved me. Thank you for supporting my contest and for sharing this. Pleasure placing this as a winner. Sending you light always
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May 15, 2026 at 12:37 PM
My deep thanks for your kind and most generous words. I'm very pleased with placing in your most fascinating contest! Have a blessed weekend!
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