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Passionate Flame

Written: August 18, 2023
Pantoum Poetry Contest                      Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh
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The moon rises high in a land where spirits swell
Passion, akin to stars, ignites a fervent heart flame
Genuine grins shine amidst silver waves of dwell
Calming whispers of breeze in the river of shame.

Passion, akin to stars, ignites a fervent heart flame
In a realm where spirits bloom, the sun rises high
Calming whispers of breeze in the river of shame
Courtly grins shine in a sea of silver, but never lie.

In a realm where spirits bloom, the sun rises high
Bolts of light arise as schooners set sail on elixir
Courtly grins shine in a sea of silver, but never lie
Inspiration, unwavering truthfulness, zero mixer.

Bolts of light arise as schooners set sail on elixir
Soul's desire glances at the divine through grace
Inspiration, unwavering truthfulness, zero mixer
an everlasting rattling—an auspicious embrace.

Soul's desire glances at the divine through grace
A melody that resonates in the recesses of the soul
An everlasting rattling—an auspicious embrace
Led by the One who transcends all forms of control.

A melody resonates in the recesses of the soul
Devotion drenches every corner where souls grow
Led by the One who transcends all forms of control
Serving as an eternal beacon of boundless joy flow.

Devotion drenches every corner where souls grow
Genuine grins shine amidst silver waves of dwell
Serving as an eternal beacon of boundless joy flow
The moon rises high in a land where spirits swell.

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Speaks Volumes August 20, 2023 at 6:54 PM Las, you bury the repetition of this pantoum in an amazing way you seem to change the meaning of a line already used, and make it a brand new line. Its like magic. That's it ! You are The Magician of the Written Word. I bow to your genius.