Passion Rises As Water Falls By Tim Smith and Seren Roberts

I love to feel the water
As it cascades over my face,
I love to feel you touch me
Through my satin and lace

I'm needing to be engulfed
In the waters falling fast
I'm needing your embrace
Our time will forever last.

I love the tingling feeling
As it sprays across my spine
Setting ,my senses reeling
Like bubbly sparkling wine.

The rushing of the stream
Getting all my juices going
The passions that I scream
It's power keeps on flowing

I love how I feel inside
As we make love beneath that fall
The nerve ends set a tingling
The passion says it all.

Let me come make your fantasy real
I'll drown in your passionate kiss
We'll get close. we'll touch we'll feel
Forever this day, we'll reminisce


Penned 21 September 2014  by Tim Smith and Seren Roberts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/23/2014 4:38:00 PM
This is such a pleasure to read. I love it Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2014 10:33:00 PM
Thank you Maurice........Seren
Date: 9/23/2014 7:51:00 AM
Seren & Tim,You are The Dynamic Dual...I wish I had a Poetry Partner in Rhyme,lol! Love You Both,Hugs...You Two are definitely Incredible,Love this write...God Bless and enjoy...Love Char...My Friends All call Me Char so You might have to too...Besides it is a lot easier to type..lol You have the most Blessed Day ever as for Me? I'll be back! Arnold swarz...,lol!
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Charlene Wilcox
Date: 9/23/2014 8:19:00 PM
OH Wow,Really???
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Char Tim was brilliant to work with. Anytime you wish to write a poem with me just holler....Seren
Date: 9/23/2014 1:03:00 AM
powerful piece of writing
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2014 2:09:00 AM
Hi Liam thanks for stopping by...Seren
Date: 9/22/2014 4:48:00 AM
Wow Seren n Tim! Passion multiplied by passion is ur write! Great collaboration n amazing final stanza!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/23/2014 2:09:00 AM
Lol Upma, was a great write with Tim.......Seren
Date: 9/21/2014 7:21:00 PM
Great passionate write you two!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/22/2014 12:53:00 AM
Was fun to do ......Seren
Date: 9/21/2014 3:25:00 PM
Very well done both of you. Love it. :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/22/2014 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, this was an easy write.....Seren
Date: 9/21/2014 3:20:00 PM
Congrats Tim and Seren on a passionate write - I'm tinglinggggggggg :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 12:59:00 AM
Hes a dream isn't he Seren - Casarah is such a lucky lady and so kind to let us borrow him for a while
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/22/2014 12:56:00 AM
Lol Tim s so easy to write with .....Seren
Date: 9/21/2014 3:01:00 PM
Love it...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/22/2014 1:31:00 AM
Lol well it's a bit late if you didn't like it ,thanks Tim was great writing with you. Hugs Seren
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