Passion Rises As Water Falls By Tim Smith and Seren Roberts

I love to feel the water
As it cascades over my face,
I love to feel you touch me
Through my satin and lace

I'm needing to be engulfed
In the waters falling fast
I'm needing your embrace
Our time will forever last.

I love the tingling feeling
As it sprays across my spine
Setting ,my senses reeling
Like bubbly sparkling wine.

The rushing of the stream
Getting all my juices going
The passions that I scream
It's power keeps on flowing

I love how I feel inside
As we make love beneath that fall
The nerve ends set a tingling
The passion says it all.

Let me come make your fantasy real
I'll drown in your passionate kiss
We'll get close. we'll touch we'll feel
Forever this day, we'll reminisce


Penned 21 September 2014  by Tim Smith and Seren Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:38 PM
This is such a pleasure to read. I love it Seren.
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Thank you Maurice........Seren
Wilcox Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Seren & Tim,You are The Dynamic Dual...I wish I had a Poetry Partner in Rhyme,lol! Love You Both,Hugs...You Two are definitely Incredible,Love this write...God Bless and enjoy...Love Char...My Friends All call Me Char so You might have to too...Besides it is a lot easier to type..lol You have the most Blessed Day ever as for Me? I'll be back! Arnold swarz...,lol!
Wilcox Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:19 PM
OH Wow,Really???
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Char Tim was brilliant to work with. Anytime you wish to write a poem with me just holler....Seren
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:03 AM
powerful piece of writing
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:09 AM
Hi Liam thanks for stopping by...Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:48 AM
Wow Seren n Tim! Passion multiplied by passion is ur write! Great collaboration n amazing final stanza!
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:09 AM
Lol Upma, was a great write with Tim.......Seren
Vaso Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Great passionate write you two!!
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Was fun to do ......Seren
Nance Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 3:25 PM
Very well done both of you. Love it. :)
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Thanks Casarah, this was an easy write.....Seren
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Congrats Tim and Seren on a passionate write - I'm tinglinggggggggg :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:59 AM
Hes a dream isn't he Seren - Casarah is such a lucky lady and so kind to let us borrow him for a while
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Lol Tim s so easy to write with .....Seren
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Love it...hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Lol well it's a bit late if you didn't like it ,thanks Tim was great writing with you. Hugs Seren
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