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Passion Fruit

earths sweetest apple grows on a tree very bare sour grapes seeks its share Favorite Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 03/09/2021 how many syllables 5/7/5

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Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2021 9:16:00 AM

David, you've written an excellent haiku on insatiable need. I really liked it; you're a brilliant writer. Have a wonderful day.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/19/2021 9:27:00 AM

Your far to kind Lasaad, I’m not worthy of such words, but I am delighted if some people get meaning from my poems, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/18/2021 12:24:00 PM

Hello David Kavanggh, thess are passion fruits. Cheers! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2021 3:54:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, oh I get it.it has lust. Cheers darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/18/2021 12:31:00 PM

Yes indeed Darlene, perhaps my passion fruit haiku is euphemistic for irresistible desire, thank you for stopping by to comment, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2021 11:44:00 AM

excellent ink David, clever title and definitely a hint of lust:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/18/2021 12:05:00 PM

Heya Jan, The forbidden fruit story conjures up all sorts of ramifications, I think lust ie, (sins of the flesh) are the core of this matter, cheers David