David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

Passion Fruit

earths sweetest apple
   grows on a tree very bare 
  sour grapes seeks its share


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Sotto Poet August 19, 2021 at 9:16 AM David, you've written an excellent haiku on insatiable need. I really liked it; you're a brilliant writer. Have a wonderful day. David Kavanagh August 19, 2021 at 9:27 AM Your far to kind Lasaad, I’m not worthy of such words, but I am delighted if some people get meaning from my poems, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu August 18, 2021 at 12:24 PM Hello David Kavanggh, thess are passion fruits. Cheers! Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu August 18, 2021 at 3:54 PM Hello David Kavanagh, oh I get it.it has lust. Cheers darlene David Kavanagh August 18, 2021 at 12:31 PM Yes indeed Darlene, perhaps my passion fruit haiku is euphemistic for irresistible desire, thank you for stopping by to comment, cheers David

Jan Allison August 18, 2021 at 11:44 AM excellent ink David, clever title and definitely a hint of lust:-) hugs Jan xx David Kavanagh August 18, 2021 at 12:05 PM Heya Jan, The forbidden fruit story conjures up all sorts of ramifications, I think lust ie, (sins of the flesh) are the core of this matter, cheers David