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passion and persuation

The Illuminating path's Serenade my Vision, The Blindening Rays of faithful horizon leap into me, Our Memories of togetherness clasp me to the loop of life, still I am lusting to cross-over and meet the Chaismatic-End!! After which,our souls will intertwine and remain in enlightened glory forever! Life had been an autumn full of blossoms, My love lay in my arms in unrequited glory, life was a maze of puzzled quotes, the dooming evil recruited you into its gloomy shadows, and i learn't my first chapter about death. DEATH is a slow poison gushing through time and seeping through seconds, Blistering a thousand souls, abandoning a many infants, sucking away the more needed ones, Thwarting pain and inflicting illicit wounds. BUT losing hope means losing "US" At a jerk,our infancy angel crosses over with warmth, And the hallucinating illuminating paths fade away!! And i realize my quest in this unfarthomable journey, TO LIVE,LOVE AND SUCCEED DEATH!!

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Date: 12/29/2011 10:37:00 AM
THIS IS MAGNIFICENT ......SUPERB....WOW .... PURELY SPELLBINDING... LOTSA LOVE MANDA
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week Vishal Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2011 2:38:00 PM
thanks people for such a warm welcome!! best of luck and love to all of you too :)
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:14:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. awesome piece luv..
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vishal manve
Date: 7/30/2011 2:39:00 PM
thanks sweetheart p.s hope to have a good stay here with you talented people :)
Date: 7/28/2011 7:30:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Vishal. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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vishal manve
Date: 7/30/2011 2:39:00 PM
hope to have a good stay here with you talented people :) thanx carol
Date: 7/27/2011 9:30:00 PM
Lovely creative expressions on passion and persuation, Vishal
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Date: 7/27/2011 4:06:00 PM
Very lovely verse and metaphors....good write.....God bless....Old Jack
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