Phyllis Babcock Poet Free verse

Passion

As the golden embers glow in the hearth
Two souls mesmerized in each other
Their hearts melting like molten lava
Two entwined souls caught in wanton desire
Embraced in passionate fire.
In fleshy union they proclaim their love
This lusting power... the power of love
Lifting their souls to new heights
They soar in a realm between heaven and earth
Fleshy union consumed body and soul
Hearts burst as two... become one
 heat highly intensified,
 engulfed in flames of desire
As  fire and passion burns down 
They lay entwined in a loving embrace.

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Keith Bickerstaffe June 4, 2012 at 3:34 PM WHEW!!! Sensual and passionate, and so well written, with a measured intensity. Nice shape, too... a loving cup, perhaps? Keith :)

Mark Goodson March 23, 2012 at 12:50 PM WoW! This is sexy !! You have inspired me.

Melanie Hillmer March 21, 2012 at 8:07 PM OOH LA LA!!! Phillis!!! You go girl!!! Very sensually written. If they do a contest requesting this type of writing, I bet it would be impossible to beat. Phyllis Babcock March 22, 2012 at 10:23 AM Thank you

Debra Squyres March 21, 2012 at 9:17 AM Intense and passionate...as it should be !!! Well done !! Phyllis Babcock March 22, 2012 at 10:23 AM Thanks

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 16, 2012 at 6:34 PM Good write, Phyl. Beautifully stated. As they say, just because there is snow on the roof doesn't mean there isn't a fire in the furnace. Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2012 at 11:55 AM You had me smiling with this . love phyl

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 9:12 PM and now for your poem. YAYYYYY I can see it's one I have not yet seen. I needed that!!!wow, a sexy one, lady. You could write for a romance novel! Was this inspired by any contest? Or just your spicy life? (hee hee) So you did not get a flu shot before winter? Gosh, don't do that again. You always have to get one, my friend. well, I was here over two hours. So I am getting off now to relax in bed. Luv, Andrea Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2012 at 11:57 AM thanks for the comments Andrea

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 9:10 PM First, thanks so much for all the many comments you gave me today. It's nice to see which poems of mine you seem most to like.

Nathan D. March 13, 2012 at 5:57 AM very lovely expression you have written here

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2012 at 11:18 AM This is Beautiful written love poem....wery soft and sweet Phyllis, enjoyed to read it. - oxox love Anne-Lise Phyllis Babcock March 17, 2012 at 11:58 AM thanks for the comments.