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Passion

As the golden embers glow in the hearth Two souls mesmerized in each other Their hearts melting like molten lava Two entwined souls caught in wanton desire Embraced in passionate fire. In fleshy union they proclaim their love This lusting power... the power of love Lifting their souls to new heights They soar in a realm between heaven and earth Fleshy union consumed body and soul Hearts burst as two... become one heat highly intensified, engulfed in flames of desire As fire and passion burns down They lay entwined in a loving embrace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2012 3:34:00 PM
WHEW!!! Sensual and passionate, and so well written, with a measured intensity. Nice shape, too... a loving cup, perhaps? Keith :)
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Date: 3/23/2012 12:50:00 PM
WoW! This is sexy !! You have inspired me.
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Date: 3/21/2012 8:07:00 PM
OOH LA LA!!! Phillis!!! You go girl!!! Very sensually written. If they do a contest requesting this type of writing, I bet it would be impossible to beat.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/22/2012 10:23:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/21/2012 9:17:00 AM
Intense and passionate...as it should be !!! Well done !!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/22/2012 10:23:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/16/2012 6:34:00 PM
Good write, Phyl. Beautifully stated. As they say, just because there is snow on the roof doesn't mean there isn't a fire in the furnace.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2012 11:55:00 AM
You had me smiling with this . love phyl
Date: 3/14/2012 9:12:00 PM
and now for your poem. YAYYYYY I can see it's one I have not yet seen. I needed that!!!wow, a sexy one, lady. You could write for a romance novel! Was this inspired by any contest? Or just your spicy life? (hee hee) So you did not get a flu shot before winter? Gosh, don't do that again. You always have to get one, my friend. well, I was here over two hours. So I am getting off now to relax in bed. Luv, Andrea
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
thanks for the comments Andrea
Date: 3/14/2012 9:10:00 PM
First, thanks so much for all the many comments you gave me today. It's nice to see which poems of mine you seem most to like.
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:57:00 AM
very lovely expression you have written here
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Date: 3/11/2012 11:18:00 AM
This is Beautiful written love poem....wery soft and sweet Phyllis, enjoyed to read it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
thanks for the comments.

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