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Passion

If you could see how other people see you now Open your heart and soul you know what to do Look to the sky, grab some rays from the sun Use that newfound energy to have some fun Your smile radiates in a powerful way You think you are not worthy of love every day The true you is trapped deep inside Take a chance and come out for a ride Your dreams are a real reflection of you Listen to them, they will show you what to do Toss aside the torments of the past Capture the new you and make it last I can feel the burning passion in your voice Let it out to be shared you have a choice I need your body close to mine Baby, you send shivers down my spine

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Date: 9/30/2024 11:11:00 PM
You nailed this one John. flow and pace hard to fault. Can feel the passion in every line. could not find a line out of place. Opening line all too true. Heeded it helps one soar, seen through uncomprehending eyes, sad. This one for my top twenty. Maybe top 10. Thanks for sharing David
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John Campbell
Date: 10/1/2024 6:01:00 PM
Your kind words are so much appreciated. Thanks for your insight it inspires me. Enjoy your evening David.
Date: 9/24/2024 3:30:00 PM
Hello John Campbell, I like what this poems says. It will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/25/2024 10:44:00 AM
Hello John , I am happy to hear this. You are welcome my friend. /Darlene/
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John Campbell
Date: 9/24/2024 6:02:00 PM
Darlene your comments mean so much to me, always appreciated.

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