Passing Time

time passing
even the bumble bee
counts coup
holes in my walls
holes in my walls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:55 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Song Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 2:20 AM
hahaha...fun tanka, Charles! Repetition works well..Gwendolen
Richards Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Love the repeated lines....great impact!
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 4:23 AM
An interesting write by you Charles.Enjoyed the read.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 11:43 PM
Nice write..
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